Style Appropriate tone, distinctive voice; pleasing variety in sentence structure; Vivid diction, precise word choices. No errors. How long it takes for that caterpillar to become a butterfly is up to the writer.
Fair Some of the details support the main idea, but there are some that do not. Sasha Long Would you mark both incorrect? Examples and details relate to the topic and some explanation is included.
Should the be in the same group for individualized writing instruction? There is little sense that the writing is organized.
It's also good practice to learn criticism and become a more efficient writer. Mostly does not follow rules of spelling and correct use of grammer.
There is a seemingly random collection of information. Review each criterion with the students and give them specific examples of what you want so they will know what is expected of them.